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Tears of Time....SNOW FELLIN CANADA 16 JAN 2021
I’m fine in cloud nine
I have no ears, tears so cheers
cash few dollars only
oldies keep murmuring
when the cows come home
with long drooping face
only tears to trace
devoid of milk
then only
me on the altar of time do place
so that I know it’s time
but not as yet
I’m so happy to see the snowfall today
wish more of it falls every day
happy at home we all have to stay
life's burdens we all carry
but singularly the same way
my voice is still loud and clear
why you all don’t want to hear
I love all near and dear
don’t ever fear
I’m always near
poets my dear
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
WHAT A HEAVY WINTRY SNOWFALL CANADA ENJOYS
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rula
Sun, 2021-01-17 08:19
I'm happy
for your happiness Lovedly.
Your words are full of hope inspite of all the difficlties yoy go through in such a cold weather.
Take care dear friend.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-01-17 11:13
Ha ha Rula
many thanks
Geezer
Sun, 2021-01-17 11:44
No cold...
of night, nor heat of day
Can from Lovedly make
Joy go away
For he doesn't fear
To tread far
And near...
Avoiding death and snake
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-01-17 14:21
And Gee my dear
today of Lovedly
a poet you make
have a hot slice of cake
or
iced creamy
as you love to rake
lovedly
Mon, 2021-01-18 12:24
GEE MY DEAR
I shared your poem they asked
why a snake
answer please is it a mistake
Geezer
Tue, 2021-01-19 16:18
Just...
that you don't fear
to tread too far
or near or tread
upon a snake
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