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A clear white canvas
A clean clear canvas
cleansed with the calming
color of clarity the color of
white .
The falling of the paint
small and faint
Yet luminous and bright
Just take in the light
as it fills into
the Gorgeosity
of the
White .
As it’s morphing
into a marvelous
Moment of my memory
When there are
no cares.
Just you and me
never to part
as we lie
within our art.
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Comments
Edward nigma
Sun, 2021-01-03 12:32
Thank you
And it is always a pleasure in hearing from you
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
c lynn brooks
Sun, 2021-01-03 16:24
Edward
white an new beginning, fresh ,clear out the old bring in the new and hope leads the way
Chrys
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Edward nigma
Sun, 2021-01-03 16:32
Thank you
My inspiration was the musical Sunday in the park with George
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Gracy
Mon, 2021-01-04 08:29
Dear Edward, what a charming
Dear Edward, what a charming poem. I like its spiritual theme. Clever opening strophe with all the words beginning with "c". The rhyming and spacing are fine, as is the title.
Enjoyed, bring on more. Happy 2021, keep safe, not sorry. God bless, Gracy
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Edward nigma
Mon, 2021-01-04 08:58
Thank you
And thank you for your opinion and stay safe to
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Edward nigma
Mon, 2021-01-04 12:36
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/TSJI2up3PZI
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.