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A Shifting of Numbers

Old year becomes new,
New year becomes old,
The circle goes on and on
Like a globe revolving

On a gyre of time.
At midnight, I heard the Church bells yelp,
And yelp, at their loudest,
To the perturbation of sweet sleeping birds

And a ruffling of still seas,
To herald a new year
Upon the soil of time,
Upon the whiskers of consciousness.

The fireworks painted the sky in rainbows;
By the chin kissed the wind at the crossing
To a new dawn, a new year,
A new sky, a new earth, a new everything.

Is it really new? From my knowingness,
The new withers at sunrise, then,
A utopia of sour cocktails soars at sunset,
Hearts become stones entombed in shadows,

But what's new? A shifting of numbers?
O new year, have you come as a dove?
Or as a viper with twin blades of venoms?
There's no knowing. What's new? I ask still.

O you poets of the sacred order of poetry,
Spin me a yarn; from your tongues of mystery
Prophesy if it comes with a new wine,
Of the fragrance of roses, or a soft skin as heaven.

Let your ink spill out its taste, a melody or a dirge.
Though the new breeze blows,
Silently I watch to uncover
If it's really new or a shifting of numbers.

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*applauds* THIS is the poem I was trying to write last night!!! I just hit writer's block again and again until I gave up on that particular one, but here you have captured those ideas perfectly and better than I ever could have.

The imagery just gives wind to the ideas beneath the poem, the simultaneous importance and worthlessness of a new year--another day. (That could just be me reading into it though).

Amazing job; I really enjoyed reading it. :)

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https://meanderingbackward.blogspot.com
"The true alchemists do not turn lead into gold; they turn the world into words." -William H. Gass

I apologize if I've stolen your ideas unknowingly. Lol. You know, I decided to write this piece early in the morning when my wife said 'happy new year' to me. Right off the bat, the idea that nothing is really new except for the number changing from 2020 to 2021 floated through my mind. Nevertheless, I want to remain optimistic that the new comes with a much better experiences than the year before. Thanks for your inspirational words.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

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Haha, no, I love it, and I'm so glad you wrote this! :D

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https://meanderingbackward.blogspot.com
"The true alchemists do not turn lead into gold; they turn the world into words." -William H. Gass

I pray the new year comes with packages much better than last year. Thanks for your time and comments. I do appreciate.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

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Thank you for posting this one. Really like the space of inquiry in it.

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Thanks for your pleasant words.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

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