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The field
In the grass
Here I lie.
Here until
The day I die.
I stray away
From the light.
Until darkness
I may fright.
It's okay
As time may pass.
The further I go
The further it lasts.
So here i lie in the grass
Here until the day I pass.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Explicit Content
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Comments
Dandini
Thu, 2020-12-24 12:12
Not very cheerful!
Not very cheerful!
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