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HOW CAN ONE WITHIN LESS TWO WEEKS CONDEMN NEO

Pre--- crash there was a system
we'd know who read us
not now anymore
except for paid members
may be

bear glare don't fear
stay or go it's your personal decision.
my new kiddy dear

I know no poetry
another newcomer like you
has often pointed it
but I compose
only FREESTYLE
as I want all to move forward

On other sites
I GET COUNTLESS
readings/comments

I want all archaic stuck poets
to have your own free style

else you will simply flow in the stream
to become a poet will be only your
pipe dream

Here perhaps
I am not the youngest
but age wise oldest
plus 80
and
have been here for the longest time
maybe over years 15

I am still being read
I comment and learn even from Neo-poets
SILENCE .
Thanks if you have read this
strip me if you wish

Even JESS hated me
but towards his end said

he'd started liking me.

He picked up all my gems.
Thanks jess
hope you are listening

Even Stan reads me
ask GEE

I even won three poems
in contests thanks stan

good day
we all crib
coz
we are free
I have six broken ribs
but still floating

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Before the guy removes his Blog ----others who have commented a newcomer read this first
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

We had a 84 year old poet woman that regularily attended our NCWN open mics. She was published, and a retired professor. She read Her work and sang much of it. Not hesitant at all. Then she stopped coming, i don’t know what happened to her.

I missed her contribution.

Thank you for this poem.

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Raywhitakerblog.wordpress.com
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Nordic Cloud
from Netherlands

yes we all miss her
an exceptional poetess
now no news
but
you have drifted from the point
I have tried to make
Do read his blog pl

author comment

I did get some of your points in your nice piece.

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Raywhitakerblog.wordpress.com
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tnx gn

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