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HELLO POLE STARS

If you permit me to say
poet,
your poetry is a class
but well above the level I feel
of those who NEO'S hand- clasp

You can't be understood
by normal guys of my unintelligent level
without a thesaurus.

So good as you may and are
beyond reach of a guy
in hurry
in a car
you in the wilderness of time are
a lonely star
distance wise beyond the Pole Star

I remain in my old perforated car

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
TRY COMPOSING SIMPLER POETRY UNDERSTOOD BY CLOTS LIKE ME What have you to say greater poets
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Not Explicit Content

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that's it ma'am thanks

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