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Mutated Thoughts...

Squirrels in lust
Date wooden peckers
The Schenectady Cat
Smokes them all

Nothing is just...
Playing with checkers
He wears black flat hat
Takes the fall

Wondering whether winter weather
Snow tires,but doesn't rest
Chili peppers are not chilly
Frosty snowmen got no balls

I knew a girl named Blue Feather
Salted sidewalks taste the best
A naked one is a free willy
Black Friday has shopping mauls

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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What did you think of my title?
Last few words: 
I thought that I would respond to Alan's challenge.
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Not Explicit Content

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just nonsense, but fun! Just random thoughts as I sat here this morning watching tv and zoning out on magic cookies. ~ Geez.
. BTW, haven't been able to get one of the pictures I took to post. Says too much/many pixels or some such.
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need a comment
as u only love
cement
use nudity in places of nakedness

its more challenging gee
ask anyone
but a lady

A naked one is a free willy

thinking about putting salt on the sidewalk as we are due to have some freezing rain. Also, thinking about the killer-whale "Willy" as it was advertised to be on TV. Nudity is not a factor in the animal world. ~Geez.
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I knew a
girl

named Blue Feather
Salted sidewalks taste the best
A naked one is a free willy

didn't meet an animal girl
gee

these are all random thoughts; not connected and supposed to be silly! And, I'm sure that you must know what a willy is?
~ Geez.
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had to chuckle at your lines. very funny, sir,
van

I do work at it. ~ Geezer.
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Hi Geez, you've really made me laugh, thank you, I needed it. Don't know what type of cat that is, do I google it or are you pulling our legs?
I love nonsense verse, do bring on more. All the best, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

Is me. I'm a cool cat in flat black hat. I live in Schenectady, New York.

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you've been smoking your running socks again darlin lol

Chrys

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the running socks are off limits. The wife says they are too smelly, They haven't been used for running in a loooonnnng time!
Magic Cookies is the thing now. ~ Geez.
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Wow, Geezer! Excellent, especially with your tight rhyme! Great title, too.
L

I try to keep my rhyme as tight as the waistband in my pants. LoL
~ Geez.
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I enjoyed this

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