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O WHAT A MELODY
I search for melody
in my remains
as I wake up and see
is blood still flowing in my veins
I have the sister
take my BP
She smiles at me
Sir
I can still hear your heart beat
relax now go to sleep
why do you weep
the world is still asleep
you have woken up too early
go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody
keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Wed, 2020-12-02 11:16
15
tnx
so far so good still alive
masked
Geezer
Wed, 2020-12-02 13:49
Yup...
Still a poet to be read. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2020-12-02 13:53
Thanks Gee
You are life and sole of LOVEDLY
on neo yet
Irenicus
Wed, 2020-12-02 14:46
Inspiring
go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody
keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody
Beautiful in every singing of it...
lovedly
Wed, 2020-12-02 14:55
thank you so much
you have the makings
of a poet in history
Irenicus
Irenicus
Wed, 2020-12-02 14:58
Awwww
that's very flattering, lovedly.
lovedly
Wed, 2020-12-02 15:21
luv you
sonny
be at it
poetry is not everyone's cup of tea
I know very little of it still
but thousands read me
at their own will