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tipped into the tides of time

Submitted by Edward nigma on Sat, 2020-11-28 11:40

You are tipped into
the tides of time
To where you
And the soulless
Sand are washed
Upon this lonesome land
Desperately
hoping for a
wholesome
Hand to hold
and a flawless
friendly
face that
Beckons you
into its warm
embrace .
But nothing
lasts forever .
Yet the
only thing
That lives on
is the endless
Sea of
Mermory.

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Dandini

Sat, 2020-11-28 12:54

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I think a few notes might help clarify what you mean as I am PUZZLED by this one.

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Edward nigma

Sat, 2020-11-28 20:25

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We are tipped into earth wanting comfort that will last forever but nothing lasts. So the only thing that comforts you are the memories
And thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Edward nigma

Mon, 2020-11-30 10:11

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Thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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