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Just follow the wind

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2020-11-22 13:53

Just follow the wind
where all does it go
as at my death
I too will begin to glow

doc be assured
I'll take my hearing aids
so that I can still
hear your stories well made

glasses I'll very much need

else the morning sun's glare
I won't be able to stare

your sweet face so clean
will be indelibly implanted
on my mind's virtual screen

doc hold on
just tell me
where you will be seen
around heavens

I have already surveyed once
to every place I've been
'tis just lovely
believe me

when you are in ICU again
let me know
I may also along with you go
two is always good company

he will be happy
lesser for him
will be his worry

where to fook for thee
some better symphony
like you'd love to have me

be happy
I will not
then bore ye

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Gracy

Sun, 2020-11-22 15:14

Dear L, what did you dream

Dear L, what did you dream last Night? Something I've missed? LOL

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

lovedly

Sun, 2020-11-22 15:44