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LIGHT CANDLES FOR SILENCE AND PEACE
You surely have discerning eyes
A CANDLE OR MANY CANDLES
we lit to commemorate
our pets final eternal move to the unknown moon
all is over
our pet had been blessed by lovely folks
even though his stay was briefer than brief
May FLASHY
now Rest in Peace
eternally beyond eternity
god bless him spiritually
he was more human
than any human could be
wish you could have him seen
an angel was
FLASHY
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
REST IN PEACE NOW ETERNALLY
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2020-11-14 09:20
Sorry...
for your loss. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-11-14 10:18
THANK YOU Gee
It has been a great personal loss for me
lonely as I be
now he rests in
PEACE
Lavender
Sat, 2020-11-14 13:37
Light Candles...
Hello, Lovedly,
Tender homage. My condolences.
L
lovedly
Sat, 2020-11-14 17:31
thank you Lav
everyone's life is
good bad or sad
the finale is
you light candles today
some one will for you
some day
if love is your
lively way
thanks for coming
our way