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Come Rain

Don't ever fear
I love
it helps me to indoors remain
away from viruses domain

so do welcome
no disdain 'no pain
happy you must remain

now suddenly
she comes
lo and behold
it really does
patter patter
ha ha

pitter pitter
sweet no
bitter biter
no batter batter

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

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that you are making the distiction of a downpouring, buckets kind of rain and a gentle lulling of a pitter-pattering shower. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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I enjoyed this poem as it can reflect different feelings about the rain . I love the sound of it (shhh that is what I have my sound machine set on)

Chrys

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Dear love, I love rain so your poem attracted me at once. Oh...that patter and then the gentle pitter pitter!
Although a downpour, especially with lightenning and crashes of thunder, can be pretty scary. We have tremendous storms in Buenos Aires. Now we have a downpour here, but it's welcome in this dry Patagonian climate.
So you see how your poem brings back memories to me.
Thanks for that, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

it's your grace
to welcome my rain in
BUENOS AIRES
what a pleasure seeing my pages traverse
how so ever good or
worse

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