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Come Rain
Don't ever fear
I love
it helps me to indoors remain
away from viruses domain
so do welcome
no disdain 'no pain
happy you must remain
now suddenly
she comes
lo and behold
it really does
patter patter
ha ha
pitter pitter
sweet no
bitter biter
no batter batter
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2020-11-07 09:55
I would guess...
that you are making the distiction of a downpouring, buckets kind of rain and a gentle lulling of a pitter-pattering shower. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-11-07 15:07
love
I enjoyed this poem as it can reflect different feelings about the rain . I love the sound of it (shhh that is what I have my sound machine set on)
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-11-07 21:20
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Thanking lynn
Gracy
Sun, 2020-11-08 17:11
Dear love, I love rain so
Dear love, I love rain so your poem attracted me at once. Oh...that patter and then the gentle pitter pitter!
Although a downpour, especially with lightenning and crashes of thunder, can be pretty scary. We have tremendous storms in Buenos Aires. Now we have a downpour here, but it's welcome in this dry Patagonian climate.
So you see how your poem brings back memories to me.
Thanks for that, Gracy
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-11-08 18:14
and ma'am Grace of Buenos Aires
it's your grace
to welcome my rain in
BUENOS AIRES
what a pleasure seeing my pages traverse
how so ever good or
worse
lovedly
Sun, 2021-08-29 23:15
have u glossed it
yet
rain is soothing but don't get unduly wet lol
lovedly
Sat, 2021-10-23 17:57
the rain comes daily but svery oftly
Long tyme not seen ma'am how uve been