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Door To The Universe October Contest
Windows and Doors
the door to the universe is open
a star so bright like a spaceship
so close I think it landed
in my backyard one night.
in the wee hours under darkness
I rose from slumber unawaken
dreams and visions no nightmares
before exiting the door that opens every night.
windows of light surround me
blues, purples, and whites
comforts me when I'm unaware I need it
I'm never alone in the space I'm in.
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2020-10-13 17:13
thank you Teddy
I will make the suggests
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Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2020-10-13 17:19
I like the imagery
Sorta like going in the out door.
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2020-10-13 19:01
Hey Ray
What is going in a out door?.. the door opens you enter but never really go out.. Youre there and not there when fully awakened ... like being in two places at same time...
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Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2020-10-13 20:20
Yes
All sorts of interpretations. I really meant my phrase as a point of juxtaposition .
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2020-10-13 20:36
oh ok
i forgot about juxtaposition. Im educated in poetry. the education I have I gain here for last 12 years
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