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cool james brown

Submitted by Edna Sweetlove on Tue, 2020-07-07 12:08

james brown was a rocker of alleged great renown
he would get it on up and he would get it on down
he used to claim he was a sex machine and did a lot of boffing
but now his mojo's got rusty and he's rotting in his coffin

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Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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I recall I used to put my earplugs in whenever Brown's music got played at the old folks' disco. I don't think this counts as "explcit" as I have intentionally avoided rude words - but if people prefer, I will happily mark it so.
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Edna Sweetlove

Mon, 2020-10-12 12:07

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...that someone at NP finally appreciated what I think is a minor masterpiece.
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xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

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