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So Secluded That I May Be

Submitted by Carl Halling on Wed, 2020-09-30 04:05

Another me,
There was another me
But not the better me,
But so carefree,
A better me,
That’s who I am today,
So secluded that I may be,
A better me,
I brought
Happy-go lucky-joy,
To many,
You might say I was a golden boy,
A better me,
That’s who I am today,
So secluded that I may be,
A better me,
I can’t be the me that
I used to be,
Simply,
I would not wish to be,
A better me,
That’s who I am today,
So secluded that I may be,
A better me.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Carl Halling

Wed, 2020-09-30 07:56

Carl Halling's picture

They are song lyrics, I was just 'road testing' them, but I think I'll remove them from the 'first team', they are fine as lyrics but that's it. Carl.

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