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Apple Your Minds

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2020-07-03 12:06

Change your thoughts

Anaconda and apple
without seed
how would you be
there would be
no flowers
in any valley
hope you are
applying your mind
as is being done
by those more modern

current mankind needs one to remind
one needs to have a superlative own mind
of your own kind

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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scribbler

Wed, 2020-08-12 15:40

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thinking for oneself is So hard. Thus the democrat party lol

lovedly

Wed, 2020-08-12 15:49

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LOLOLOLOLSTAN Y
OU NOW STAND O MAN
TIMES CHANGE MUST COME

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lovedly

Thu, 2020-08-13 08:42

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I observe some error in neos technicals
some ne have a look

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