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Greenhouse Effect

Submitted by Dennis Go on Thu, 2011-02-10 21:19

To me
You are
The heating sun,
Giver of life,
Shower of warmth.

I am
To you
The iceberg
Melting.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Dennis Go

Sat, 2011-02-12 21:26

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I'm glad you liked this one. I've been trying hard to come up with short, concise pieces.

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Regards,
Dennis

"Death smiles on us all. All a man can do is smile back." ~ Maximus Decimus Meridius

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