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My Life
My Life
My life is just like the night sky.
All dark just small sparks of light.
Which is in no ones sight.
These sparks might mean something, but its too dark.
Its just too hard to think, so I let it sink.
Style / type:
Free verse
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
raj
Mon, 2020-07-27 07:37
Hi Mariam
Welcome to Neopoet. Your poem does emote inner thoughts, feelings and emotions. I am sure someone would definitely sight the sparks of light sooner or later. Very fact is that you refer to it as a source of light which signifies energy. I hope I have read the intent of the poem correctly.
Keep writing and expressing,
raj (sublime_ocean)