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Twidiot
Hook line and sinker
Now a twittering stinker uses my clothes
That opinionated SOB even looks like me
Tee hee hee
He's free to cuss and fume and howl at the moon
And, brevity is a must
Trimmin' hashtags flags verbosity and
even 1 more symbol is not tolerated
The thimble only hold this much
tough to do unless I remember I can fill page 2 too
if I damn well please
Sieze the day away and talk to them!, twidiot
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Quick ditty to jump back in. Playing on the word plane plain silliness.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Gracy
Wed, 2020-07-22 21:29
Hi Miserably Happy,
Hi Miserably Happy, interesting topic. It reads more like prose than poetry, but my guess is that is what you want. Not sure what you mean and to whom you're referring. Perhaps you could give me an idea.
Powerful piece, nonetheless. Best, Gracy (I prefer to call you Happy!)
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