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''FAR AWAY AND LONG AGO''...SOUTH AMERICA
''FAR AWAY AND LONG AGO''
Life of young lonely kids
in orchards
if I remember correctly
---1954/5/6
In the vast
Orchards of South America
from where you may hail now
Many lambs
must have been sacrificed
many more reborn
This human race is full of animals
shall never be left forlorn
twice as many will be born
Man has only one hobby
Do you want me to narrate it
Glad you all are a step
or maybe two
ahead of me
simply
lovedly
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
SENIOR CAMBRIDGE 195/5/6 LITERATURE DISTINCTION
POETRY derived as a possible PRODIGY
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2020-07-13 14:10
not Fun
I am one among many human
just enjoying humor
as PUN
Western world's Fun
you know
No15
the only reason
how mammalian life
is begun
lovedly
Sat, 2022-04-16 22:22
IT was a long time ago
did anyone here know
GEE
CATS
OR RAY YOU
OR
YOU you and yoU
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-04-17 05:28
dear lovedly.
it seems that man's favorite pastime and fascination is with killing. and it should stop !!!
*hugs, Cat
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