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Doggy Love
Reminds me of my
Lovely
doggy
its tongue is always
hanging
around
wet saliva dripping
and
Lovely gasping
it's really handy
at times he licks
often he conveys
a ravishing smile
my tongue lashes back
hello
Lovely
lick me
he wags his tail and conveys
0ld guy you
I love your grand kids
and
flies away
quickly
my sweet tongue
comes out
O Lovely
now not to be seen
lol
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Gracy
Fri, 2020-07-10 21:30
Hi lovedly, what a sweet poem
Hi lovedly, what a sweet poem. I love doggies, used to have so many. Yours sounds like a darling. Not sure what you mean by "Oldies". At the beginning it should be "its tongue". No other nits, gives me a good feeling. The title might be cliche, but it all fits together nicely. Thanks for cheering me up, Gracy
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-07-11 03:39
Thanks Gracy ma'am done
oldies means
old guys aged ones
over say 75 /80 years age wise
raj
Sat, 2020-07-11 04:00
Sweet poem
as Gracy commented...
be well ..
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sat, 2020-07-11 06:14
thanks thanks
glad u liked it raj