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A Day At the Beach

Submitted by LorienLord on Fri, 2020-07-03 18:10

A flash of white makes me hard
thinking of what is below,
and I have taken time
to oil your canvas in my mind
finger painting my desire
as you dance across the sand.

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sat, 2020-07-04 13:23

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another day at the beach. Yeah, we can be vague and yet full of promise. A neat and short poem that leaves much to the imagination. Who? When and why? ~ Geezer.
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jetz

Sat, 2020-07-04 14:45

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Tan lines!!! I love summer!
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