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Enough

I sit here in this very room alone
every night contemplating my life and choices
thinking to my self will i ever be Enough
will i ever be Enough for my father
will i ever make him happy
will i ever be Enough to be loved right
sometimes when i have good days
i always think im Enough for everything
but lately it seems like no matter
what i do or say
i will never be Enough
not Enough for anyone
or anything

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Last few words: 
We as humans always fight with out self's or our anxiety and we tend to push our self down and we tend to have pressure from others or family to be successful , but we usually feel like we fail especially when they tend to react negative towards you , so i felt this was really relatable.
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Welcome to Neo. and I hope you find your voice here. You have a very good start and I can find nothing to
criticize. I do agree with her, that the capitalization of [enough] makes it seem like it is of extreme importance and makes the lines that contain it that much more valuable. Nice work for your first here. I hope that we will see much more from you. ~ Geezer.
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Hello!
Wonderful poem. I, too, like that you used a capital for Enough. I feels like you personified it, as if Enough is a completely different person than you - not you. Maybe another poem around the corner has "i" in caps and Enough in lower case?
Thank you!
L

Thank you guys , yea i agree with everything and thank you so much for the corrections and ideas . I have a lot of more poems to share and hope to get some more tips and much more ! thank you guys once again .

author comment

well I got here late,all corrections are made Please use upper case where applicable
alll I have to say is for one welcome , second it was a pleasure meeting you in chat
and most important please yourself not others, be YOU
looking forward to seeing more from you

Chrys

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I forgot to add perhaps a stronger title something to draw a person in

Chrys

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that for some there is never enough. Welcome to the asylum. If you have any questions concerning the sight just holler and if I don't know the answer I'll steer you to somebody who does

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