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Wet

Submitted by jetz on Sun, 2020-06-07 15:38

Your words of love
bring me to tears
but when you speak
to me in tongues -
my body weeps.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

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Rula

Mon, 2020-06-08 01:43

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Great to read you again. I thought this is a great example for a well-compact poem. You said much in few lines.
Hope you and Patrick are doing well.
Thanks for sharing dear.

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Gracy

Sun, 2020-06-07 19:54

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Hi Sue, I think this is the first time I've read your poems. Lovely piece, all said in remarkable synthesis. Not sure about the title. Will return, keep safe, best, Gracy

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jetz

Fri, 2020-07-03 04:04

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Thanks for the read Gracy. Much appreciated.
The title is my favorite part!

Sue

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Geezer

Sun, 2020-06-07 20:43

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Nice to see ya. I do believe that you are speaking of wet kisses and they will drive anybody crazy! Nice compact poem, nothing to criticize. ~ Geezer.
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jetz

Fri, 2020-07-03 04:10

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Hey there Geezer,
Nice of you to stop by. Thanks for the read and reply.
Much appreciate your time. Your read was close enough.
Any more details and I'll blush.
Compact indeed. Thanks again!
Sue

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jetz

Fri, 2020-07-03 04:02

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Hi Rula,
It's been a while. Thanks for your kind words. I've been trying my hand at minimalistic
poetry and much to my surprise, it has proven to be quite fun. It is a challenge for me.
Patrick is well. Thanks for asking. I'll tell him you asked for him. . I do hope you are well
and that you and your family have stayed ahead of the virus and all it entails.

Sue

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