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Ode to Passionate Modern Lovers

Passion rarely dies
even@75
and
Aussies are too
gay
many
passionate
all know it

I love the beach
and your sunny
sun down the ocean
snap its a beauty
have you ever read me my
Moms Smiles
do please

and

NOW THIS
when riders ride
they ride like

ALEXANDER THE GREAT

They never look back
were's my valet
and now
do read this

Lovely must have been
her ass
or horse's
will you help
find hers

coz she wears nothing but
her butt
and
smile

in the kids swimming pool
I have lost her
romantic heart
'twas only for me
.
so I have been
looking for her
in the sea

she has nothing on
but
glee

smile please

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

What an odd idea!

xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

Echoes of bewilderment! Sometimes, you unknowingly say the best things, lovedly.
~ Geezer.
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I think only you understand
lovedly
thanx

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teddy 15
u r great

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Dear lovedly, I'm kinda confused by your poem. I understand, but it's a bit much, sort of wandering, what with Alexander the Great and all that. Will return when my mind works better.

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

This poem is based on a poetess
who keeps traveling on a horse
but never looks back etc....

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since morning

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