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Lovely Dale

A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry

neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon

yet our true love
throughout the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where

yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me
will always be

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

you have a beautiful pen hand i see maybe this is a letter to someone you love and to whome you cannot be with in this moment due to carona virus. i know many millions are suffering this moment and its like a love letter.

but just for the future if i may?
look at how beautifully written this part is without speaking of the virus.

A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry

neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon

yet our true love
through out the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where

yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me

lovely work.

Thank you...Teddy

Oh what a gracious beautiful poem. Makes me wish it was written for me.
Just one small thing throughout is it one word?

Thank you...Teddy

A very beautiful poem about a merging into one.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

tyro

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