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Lovely Dale

A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry

neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon

yet our true love
throughout the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where

yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me
will always be

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

A very beautiful poem about a merging into one.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

tyro

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