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Lovely Dale
A very beautiful vision
in the distant horizon
I see
as you are narrating your
love engraved poetry
neither the stars will be thee
nor will I be
as a shining
Moon
yet our true love
throughout the wilderness
will stare
where will you be
I, where
yet the moon
in you
and
sun
in me
will always be
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
tyro
Fri, 2020-05-22 11:40
A very beautiful poem about a
A very beautiful poem about a merging into one.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
lovedly
Fri, 2020-05-22 12:48
Thank you so muchly
tyro