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The Artist

Like molten lava the passion of creativity
through the soul of the artist flows

The sweet sultry tones
stoke the fire
illuminating his eyes
which see the world as something new

Filled with beauty and mystery
in every brush stroke
the simplicity of the man
belies the complexity of his hand

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How about saying: Seeing the world anew each day?
~ Gee.
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thanks for the read
I like the short sound of that line
but I thank you for your suggestion

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Thank you reading .I did use your suggestions

Chrys

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1.illuminating ''his'' eyes

2.the simplicity of the ''man''
belies the complexity of ''his'' hand

you may like to reconsider
1.one's eyes
2.you may like here
to apply a poet's mind

thank you for reading. why the quotation marks

Chrys

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Thank you. I don 't think anyone can answer that question guess it depends on what one believes

Chrys

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