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Oh! Connoisseurs of Love MODIFIED
Teenage
At your teenage
You must do more
Than you say
you’d do
In a life time...
Teenage comes just once
That’s why
Though grown in age
I’m still,
in teenage
Have some fun
Your life has just begun,
My teen age
Is still in rage
Even at my physical stage.
Copyright
Roses
Unknown Poet
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-02-09 14:26
Hahaha. I said you were a
Hahaha. I said you were a teenager or a dirty old man.
In either case, who amoung us doesn't want to be *noticed* with or without poetry, with or without raging hormones or the need for Viagra? lol,
But your poem, though it has something to say, tell me, if you didn't write it would you read it?
~A
loved
Wed, 2011-02-09 15:08
When u attain only then come to contain
''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''I'm evolving, .......devolving and revolving ...........along the personage of Anna. Who she is changes. Who I am, I'm just beginning to know, understand and love in spite of myself...just because I am.............
U HAVE A LONG,LONG, LONGER THAN LONG ....WAY TO GO
IN TO THE WILDERNESS OF TIME
WE SHALL AWAIT YOUR RETURN
FROM ETERNITY
TILL THEN YOU HAVE BEEN ELIMINATED
KNOW IT
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