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Adultery

Spring is in the air and so is married love;
For marriage is a gift from up above.
Holy wedlock offers one unending joy
Which all the sands of time will ne'er alloy:
Once you're married both of you are free
To get stuck into some adultery.
From now on each new fornication
Will have an extra-marital bonk-relation.
So go and get your neighbours' tongues a-wagging:
With some adulterous randy hardcore shagging.
Ah! que j'aime une nuitée chaude de fornication
(tellement, tellement mieux que la masturbation).

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amusing take on being married with the same old lusts! I'm not sure of the consequences of both of the partners being encouraged to have affairs; except that adultery must be fun! People do it all the time! Must be that unless you get married, you can't have as much fun cheating on your significant other! I think I'll pass, my life is exciting enough. Geezer.
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