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DIGITAL KIDS
My brain is made of golden chips
that's why that alone works mostly
hold one
will you
and
then someone will say
golden threads one is now on
whose
will be news
the chip will ask a question
is it now on
or
say diamond slow down
better on than off
so digital God gave a hint
one for that
and
zero we can't say
we all know not
hence one and a dot
keep fixing a lot
genetic progeny
in each slot
a vertical dash
and
then shall come a dot
bang on the given slot
a one and a zero
in turn off and on
one at a time
else both shall be gone
Style / type:
Free verse
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Last few words:
DIGITAL KIDS
perhaps you know not still
‘tis digital kids
This is just sheer imagination
how future kids will be born
scientifically
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2020-02-03 09:22
I kind of...
get it. Maybe you should, try to clear up the matter of the diamond? ~ Gee.
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lovedly
Mon, 2020-02-03 10:50
updated any better brain chips Gee
golden threads one is now on