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Eye Contact
She looked into
my eye
held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done
so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy
hold on for a while
in lovedly's style
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
they say
eye contact is dangerous
some may give inappropriate messages
some invites
how would one know
Editing stage:
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Comments
scribbler
Tue, 2020-01-28 14:48
lol
looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem
lovedly
Wed, 2020-01-29 02:44
thanks
scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun