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Down Town New York

Family is all today
a small fragmented part in society
still continues to together stay
all others are friends
who lisp mostly

who expect a loved one will ever kiss
one fading into oblivion
hoping one may stay
with love and affection
if it comes one's way

you are lucky
that I must say

New York still welcomes you
till this day

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New York the city with ten million strangers hoping for all the things we all want. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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