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Safe From My Being

Submitted by medes879 on Sun, 2019-10-20 10:10

getting to the matter of fact
through an embrace with perks

beneath the shelter of her smile
shine your light on...on,

we let one shine
or to fly...

seek to love a verse will rise
safe from my being

to care for a riddle
seek vast for shelter

love to linger
explorer the horizon

let go with the flow
keep it before the ploy

a kiss for a girl & boy

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Sparrow 42

Tue, 2019-11-12 03:32

Whoops, this in its simplicity lost me in the understanding way.
I couldn't seem to follow a story,
Maybe I am getting old lol.
Please could you just drop me a line on this one as I is lost,
Yours Ian ..

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