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Autumns and Winters of Life
79 Autumns I have seen
in a life that cannot be forgotten
54 Winters We have seen
since attachment as destined .
How many more autumnal poetry
I shall compose
can anyone now suppose
Many chills we have to bear
winter here kills
so we trot away to another sanctuary
migrate as birds
see you next summer
be patient please .
now going for a morning walk
wait kindly
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2019-10-26 17:30
You left me...
with a little mystery and I just had to try and figure out; why the discrepancy between the amount of Autumns and winters that you have seen? I'm counting twenty-five. I am guessing that you have spent twenty-five years in some warm and balmy place, waiting for your winter to be gone, before you return to the temperate climate. ~ Geezer.
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lovedly
Sat, 2019-10-26 19:17
Gee mark the difference I..79 AND ''WE'' ..54 RIDDLE EH
79 Autumns I have seen
in a life that cannot be forgotten
54 Winters We have seen
since attachment as destined
Now decipher
Geezer
Sun, 2019-10-27 11:14
In a relationship...
for twenty-five years? You got me baffled.
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lovedly
Sun, 2019-10-27 13:04
one more try Gee
married 54
can't believe it j
ust try will ye
Sparrow 42
Mon, 2019-10-28 04:24
Loved Or Lovedone or even lovedly
You is a Canadian goose, that flies south for the Winter, probably one of those, judging by your travels goes South of the equator for Winter.
.25 years of missing Winter send me some tickets please lol
Have a lovely summer again young Bard,
Yours Ian ..
Words can build a nation
Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2019-10-28 03:00
Fifty four years,
Fifty four years watching Autumns and winters together, that deserves praise on it's own. Congrats, may yous see many more, Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lovedly
Mon, 2019-10-28 10:16
Kindness THANKS
Roscoe Lane
you have won the
riddle gain
Geezer
Mon, 2019-10-28 11:34
Ahhhh...
I just got the numbers mixed up. I meant fifty-four. You must have been twenty-five when you met.
Too many late nights, lately. LoL
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lovedly
Mon, 2019-10-28 17:11
Too many late nights, lately. LoL .
Ha ha
wish you many more