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Silent Thoughts Recall
Congratulations
for the seriously silent poem
ever written
He'd love your devotion
I silently share your loneliness
and hope
you will have your balance life
one of silent calmness
Eternity is too far to see
let him in your heart
forever live
still
Silently
He will speak with thee daily
your silence will vanish
like a summer's breeze
as your voice in smiles
shall freeze
now kindly read
Silently please
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2019-08-04 11:32
I just had...
to let you know, that I love the line " Eternity is too far to see". ~ Gee.
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lovedly
Sun, 2019-08-04 14:31
Thanks Gee
many liked it
lovedly
Sat, 2019-08-10 23:55
" Eternity is too far to see". ~ Gee.
thnx again Gee
many can't yet see
my imagery