title and a glance at the phone-sex market? The pseudo rhyme and the pattern reflects the mood of such a phone-call-thing. The beginning is of a customer that knows what they want and the ending; the caller being dominated by the receiver. [They way I see it]. I like the idea of using the warning that this is Adult, Erotic, and you are free to use it anytime you feel the need, but I didn't think it was necessary this time. I do believe that it is well within the limits of decency. ~ Gee.
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decency
till foreplay maybe

thereafter
sexiness forgets
all
experience speaks
you can't be naive

if you don't have the music, show it to someone who has. It's where the money is too!

Based on your reading list you know what poetry is. Good lyrics are equally important to me as poetry, and I'm not passing judgement. I can't write them.
But there is a difference, like between watercolor and oil painting. Lyrics are transparent and easy, with repetitions, and catchy phrases...often about getting together to do the nasty...poetry..well as Dorianne Laux: put it “All poetry is preparation for death” (not quite true, but somewhat)