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LONELY YE

When one is bereft
lonely

one who is alone amongst many
lonely

one who craves the warmth of breasts
lonely

one who basks in the darkness of hope
lonely

for such ones I have a solution
one only

get someone
permanently in your home
remain no more
lonely

let in the one
you can say come
now you are not
lonely

but never rely on
Internet
only

the rest of your life
you will remain
everlastingly

LONELeeeeee

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Comments

Not really a poem but advice to those with problems,
The loneliness seems to filter through from your being
I am less active here at the moment as I have many other things to do, and your time thing gets in the way.
Good to see you here still going strong,
Take care young Bard and talk some more in poetic ways, Yours Ian

Words can build a nation

u 2 IAN
They say modern verse
needs no rhyme nor reason
'tis modern generation
consider it POETRY first

So u 2 do Ian

Stay busy that keeps one all over warm
IAN U NEED IT as muchly
as any one
@81

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