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Long Nights
Shades of the soul
refusing- - - to close,
another- - - long night.
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Bwilliam
Tue, 2019-05-28 10:50
Insomnia
This is one of my published poems.
author commentGeezer
Fri, 2019-05-31 03:09
Nice work...
Yeah, I've had many a night like that. Where you just keep going over he events of the day, asking yourself, " What could I have done differently or why did I do that? ~ Geezer.
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