I do not understand about David Lynch much but I enjoyed the quick and short poem

I read this poem 3 x The third was a charm You know that I'm extremely fond of your linguistic agility Having said that an immunity to it has set in from the abstruse worked over disjuncture of your product I get symbolism and metaphor I get surreal but after serious consideration of your influence over me as a writer and what ideas influence you it emerged that treading the rash in the name of surrealism as license to abstract maybe in the final analysis unsound

I've been a yogi for 50 yrs familiar with the body electric, altered stats, occult ritual work that shakes the very foundational baseline of human existence ,so maybe I know something about anti matter reality more than most, but I also live in this concrete jungle of stress, mortality and relationships etc
To me while you are capable of so much I feel like you only write for the right side of the brain In other words you leave half of yourself out and subsequently half of the reader creating a hindrance

Through my own struggle to write it is not lost on me that the concrete elements in the Images of a disambiguous narrative demands strategic grounded language; perhaps too prosaic for your taste.
Conversely while surrealism permits a creative elasticity yielding unexpected striking imagery, as your poem does so beautifully, for me your write has a perplexity though, an excessive weight to the eye and ear. While ample in painterly charm its like deciphering an arcane hieroglyphic and even amplified in this case by the surreal obscurity and meta babble of Twin Peaks and or Blue Velvet of which I myself was a fan
I appreciate that we both respectively occupy at least mentally various cultural margins and I am not unsympathetic to your cause If you write exclusively for yourself my comments may remain irrelevant to you but if you write to connect with even a few others beyond cacophonies of image and disjunctured asymmetrical narratives it is my opinion that your work needs to add a kind of greater grounding in the viscera of the human heart ie literal emotional content produced through the linear and then you will have killed both birds successfully; and both sides of the brain will be conquered:
Best Z

Understood: In my view the majority of writers deal with the narrative head-on The mystification of reality is what makes surrealism in the broad sense obscure because it speaks to the surrealist methodology—the use of techniques, such as automatic writing, self-induced hallucinations, and word games like the exquisite corpse to make manifest repressed mental activities. What's not obscure about that in the context of most literature?..... which is in the main is constructed linear plot and character oriented.

this rolls right off the tongue and excites my sometimes surrealist brain. I haven't watched a lot of David Lynch, so a lot is lost on me. but I enjoyed the marriage of psychedelia with somewhat religious imagery.