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Circle In The Sky

Submitted by chevyvent on Fri, 2019-02-22 17:52

solution bing noise pollution,
reckless booty cow wrench doing
melody creating from thee
the crusty cheese
the sliver will cease
below the bass across the land of no mistake
got it in the new place to shine
one web will climb
out of a blizzard squeeze

change with the willow all apart at the sky
a humble lulabye
the mark of the circle in the sky,
cherish the wind

plant the seed of compromise known as twice your size
quench pass villains to charge
minus the weight of the sun
kiss the moon nor the sky
a harvest of champions
all my eyes are closed

the mere length of the mockery let to help one please
catcch through the curtan nor move to slow to climb

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Geezer

Sat, 2019-02-23 09:23

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