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A Poem is Metaphor
rational thought
a geometry of flatulence
a poem is metaphor
I can kill you in a poem
and walk away scot free
so bend over
I got a gun in your ass
ready aim bang
I love you
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Is the internal logic consistent?
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2019-02-21 14:42
Love it...
Short, sweet and to the point.
~ Geezer.
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zebra
Fri, 2019-02-22 04:16
:)
:)
Eumolpus
Sat, 2019-02-23 02:03
Well done
Short and to the point. Just funny. In that very good sadistic way! Perfect
Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings
zebra
Sat, 2019-02-23 04:06
Thank you Mark Really
Thank you Mark Really appreciated!!
Best Z