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The Mirror
It smiled as we approached
We came nearer
To check our appearances
Did our clothes hang well
We made adjustments here and there
The mirror knew our faults
It smiled again as we left
We would come again
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
Dear Neopoets
do you like my poem. You can contact me at my email address
[email protected]
Eulekia
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Mon, 2019-01-07 21:50
Your poem is deeply subversive and disturbing.
I congratulate you, ironically [smiles a bit weirdly].
What? You think we want Hallmark cards here?
Follow this up with the courage to directly attsck mediocrity in all forms without getting arrested as a member of ISIS.
Seriously, Eulekia, I see great promise here.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Eulekia
Thu, 2019-01-24 07:35
The Mirror
Weirdelf
thank you for your comment on my poem. I will be sending more of my poems in.
Eulekia
ami
weirdelf
Mon, 2019-01-07 23:03
I can't help noticing that you have not been offering much
in the way of critique to others.
This is a community, not a service.
Oh, we could offer a critique service if your were prepared to pay. But unless it was a lot of money we wouldn't do it anyway.
We are a community.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Eulekia
Thu, 2019-01-24 07:38
About Critique
Dear Jess
I will do so more often.
Eulekia
ami