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The Mirror

It smiled as we approached
We came nearer
To check our appearances
Did our clothes hang well
We made adjustments here and there
The mirror knew our faults
It smiled again as we left
We would come again

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Dear Neopoets do you like my poem. You can contact me at my email address [email protected] Eulekia
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I congratulate you, ironically [smiles a bit weirdly].

What? You think we want Hallmark cards here?

Follow this up with the courage to directly attsck mediocrity in all forms without getting arrested as a member of ISIS.

Seriously, Eulekia, I see great promise here.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Weirdelf
thank you for your comment on my poem. I will be sending more of my poems in.

Eulekia

ami

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in the way of critique to others.
This is a community, not a service.
Oh, we could offer a critique service if your were prepared to pay. But unless it was a lot of money we wouldn't do it anyway.
We are a community.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Dear Jess
I will do so more often.

Eulekia

ami

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