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Selfies are free

young gals and guys
taking selfies
together or alone
coz who knows
who will be the new pair
and so another selfie
with a fresher one
will take care

digitize all snaps and time
we have to be slaves
all our lives
now of selfies
O man
be a selfies kinda fan

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has to be one of your better little poems! I feel the current flowing and watch my friends and family preen before the camera! It's almost electric! ME ! Me! Me ! I started this decade calling this generation, The ME generation. Not necessarily a bad thing: hell yes, let everybody know where you are at and what is your thing. I like the not so subtle way of you reminding the reader that we are slaves enough to our daily lives as it is. Nice! ~ Geezer.
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young gals & dudes
takin selfies
together or alone
coz who knows
who will b the new pair
& so another selfie
with a fresher one
will take care
digitize snaps & time
we have to be slaves
all our lives

O family of man
be a selfies kinda fan

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

may we call you
Neoplus
none dare fuss

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