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Cosmic
In the shadows lurks a desire
to seek the naked truth
of free spirit.
Stepping out it's energized
to dwell in the cosmos
for ever after.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
raj
Sat, 2018-12-29 13:13
Hi April
Thanks again for reading and your good words...This not being a haiku/senryu/sonnet I haven't consciously kept track of the syllable count...please feel free to make suggestion if that would help improve meter / cadence...appreciate your stopping by friend..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentRula
Sun, 2018-12-30 02:33
Cosmic
It Is... I mean the idea and the theme of this little gem.
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raj
Sun, 2018-12-30 04:17
Thanks Rula
for reading and your comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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