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The family man
He came from a hardworking clan
Sometimes he travelled to distant lands
The hardworking man Morning after morning he toiled
To provide for his family
Now and then he checked on them
To find out who needed what and when
He protected them and loved them all
He was the family man
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Eulekia
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Eulekia
Fri, 2018-12-28 07:44
The family man
Thank you Mark
I will be sending more of my poems. I hope you like them too. You can send further replies to
my email address [email protected]
Eulekia
ami
author commentEulekia
Fri, 2018-12-28 07:57
The family man
Thanks Mark.
Eulekia
ami
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Fri, 2018-12-28 07:47
The family man
Dear April thank you
I will be sending more of my poems. I hope you like them too. You can contact me at my email address
[email protected]
Eulekia
ami
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