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WINTER FUNK

There is no warmth outside today
when ice and sleet cover the ground
beneath a freezing sky of gray
whose cold winds set the pines to sway.
No hints of autumn are around.

For this is winter at its worst
no thoughts of spring come into mind.
Shoulders hunch, cold lips are pursed
I survey a landscape that seems cursed
a world described, at best, unkind.

And now I top a final hill,
more chore than joy found in this walk.
I'm lucky not taking a spill
tripped by some vine beside the tiny rill
or by a gimpy knee's cold balk.

I look about the bleak surroundings
and think of how all seasons end.
All winters always lead to springs
but as things always lead to things
one day I'll feel my last cold wind.

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I appreciate your stopping by to read this oldie which I brought back for workshop purposes.

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I hope you are not taking any chances on falling! Please do not do that! this is such a gloomy poem, for you, uncharacteristic of you. but it is an excellent poem. eddy said to tell you so...

*hugs, Cat
^ever, eddy styx

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It seems lately that falling is all I do lol. But I'm tough enough to have done so with little resulting harm to anything but my ego

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I would be falling all the time if it were not for my cane and w-chair. You be careful, ya hear?

*hugs, Cat

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Steven does so much for me. From awakening to bedtime. He is a real treasure and I tell him so every day. Sometimes I feel like a burden on him He never complains. our 42nd anniversary is June 27th.

*hugs & love, Cat

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Come this Aug. third Susan and I will be married 50 years

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