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Mysterious [dedicated to 41st]
It's not a Rubik of six by nine,
some believe it's coded on a line.
It's more like a jigsaw with umpteen pieces,
for folks to figure out it's puzzling faces.
Where to begin is like toss of a coin,
not everyone though gets it fine.
Some give up playing, early in the game
others keep trying, not easy to tame.
No one does have a magic band,
there's nothing here, like the sleight of hand.
It's all about fixing pieces right,
though some are crooked, some with straight side
For some it's a struggle, it's fun for some,
winners are those who get it done.
Puzzled faces wear a winsome smile
at the end of a journey on it's final mile.
That's life!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Dedicated to that Man from Texas- the 41st - who got it right
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Sun, 2018-12-09 14:42
Thank you April
for reading and your good encouraging words ....appreciate your taking time to read..
warmly...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
IRiz
Sun, 2018-12-09 22:17
Puzzle of life.
Puzzle of life.
It is a good idea, Raj.
IRiz
raj
Mon, 2018-12-10 05:28
Thanks IRiz
for your good words...appreciate your visit as always..
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raj (sublime_ocean)