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Self Perception

Lonely
I can't be without a crowd
Alone
I can even be a cloud

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Well, you have most assuredly gotten a few interesting points across. I can see where you are very analytical in your approach and that is something I rarely come across and welcome. Your work, from what I have read, is a mixture of intellectual, abstract and sometimes whimsical tenant. This too, is rare, in my estimation and a different avenue of attack. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Mario Vitale

for reading and your comment..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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crowd on earth
cloud in heavens

for reading

crowd here is in the context that one feels lonely if going unnoticed in a crowd

even be a cloud is in the context that being alone one is free to fantasize or also as feel on top of the world
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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what was in the mind
of the poet at that time
each one has freedom
for one's own opinion/vision
unless the poet says
what he wants to in prose as explanation
Thanks raj ur educated
I am just learning
the poetic abacus

I believe the beauty of this is that it can be read differently and interpreted differently.
I thought the cloud thing has an advantage over being among the noisy crowd though I know this is not your intention.
I like nevertheless its being succinct.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

your interpretation is also valid...thanks for reading...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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